Hey all! I'm currently taking both a poetry and a fiction writing class. I thought I'd put some of my rough draft work out in this format. Read it if you'd like and feel free to comment.
For today we wrote a paragraph of descriptive prose.
"The crisp, dry leaves, flashing crimson, lemon, and ginger,
rustle softly but swiftly above the dry and now barren ground. They stand in
stark contrast to the pristine white trunks and branches. Above the canopy sit
marshmallow clouds that waft through the sky, gently eased forward on their
trek by the sudden chilled air, which whips around my body. My exposed skin
waxes cool and clammy after a brisk walk in these woods.
"The sun greets me with his perky glowing beams, and my face
flushes while enveloped in his warmth. Overhead the owl’s somber hoot and
silent flight penetrate my mind’s eye, and I’m reminded again of the vast
civilization dependent on this warmth, light, and life for being.
"Gazing eastward toward the jagged boulders spotted with
evergreen boughs, I spot a gruff black bear inhaling silver skinned salmon, the
coral flesh suspended from his massive jaw."
As always, this is my original work. Please do not plagiarize.
Hope you enjoy!
Aimee
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